Run away to the far lands
Where there is no noise
Where peace has his home
There the lovely morning smiles
With rising of the sun
Birds sing and cry
Plants dance away
Wind gives a message and goes away
Then the night falls
Sky wears its twinkling gown
Moon shines and smiles
This is the place where good lies
this is the place known asย – Paradise!
Lovely poem.Paradise is here on earth.
Thanks Amrita, especially coming from you
เคเคฐ เฅเคฟเคฐเคฆเฅเคธ เคตเคฐ-เคฐเฅ-เค เคเคฎเฅ เค เคธเฅเคค
เคนเคฎเฅ เค เคธเฅเคค เคนเคฎเฅ เค เคธเฅเคค
Great poem…๐๐
Thanks so much Dheeraj
Plzure mam
You discovered the real Paradise.
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How beautifully your words recreated Paradise, Manisha! Love the pic you shared too, it’s so apt!
Thanks Mayuri
Beautiful poem and a nice picture to go with it ๐
Thanks so much Deepa ๐
Mahek, love every words. It’s breezy, lyrical and like the flutter of wind:)
Great words, you have taken me back in the moment with those words ..Thanks a ton ๐
I missed it in fact and wanted to do a post as hosted by Blogadda!
I am sure there is gonna be another chance
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good luck
A lovely poem, Mahek. You have described the paradise extremely well with your choice of words.
Thanks Rohan ๐
Very well written. Love the lines that Paradise is where the good lies…
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